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make it stop she screams
as a deathly tune plays through her heart and soul
as her world shatters into a million pieces  
no one sees the pain she truly is in
her mask that no one sees through
is what is blinding her from piecing together her world that is broken
alone in her darkness with her world broken shattered like million snowflakes
As they spin around  her unable to let her put her world together as everything dies
as she going crazy trying to puts back her world trying hard with all with of all her might
as her hope is disappearing as the million pieces of shatters snowflakes fall and hit her stabbing her hope and only dream to be free as soon as THEY give up on her   
her world falls apart   

i know it's not good but i wanted to wright it
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I love this, it's really well written, excellent! I love it :D
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:iconbrokenfallenangel013:
THANK YOU SO MUCH XD
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IceClawWolf Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is actually really good
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ggpeckham Jun 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
i think its pretty good
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